You did a great job of telling this story. I like all the details you put in like it was hot water and the towels were mostly dry. I can imagine in my mind exactly what was happening.
You did a great job of telling this story. I like all the details you put in like it was hot water and the towels were mostly dry. I can imagine in my mind exactly what was happening.
William, that was an exciting description of the flood! Your details made it so that I could see in my mind what was happening. I can see everyone running up and down the stairs to catch the water! Good job!
Wow! It must have been crazy with all that going on! Wonderful details, I love the story! That was a very exciting thing to write about. Keep writing awesome stories! ~Rachel
You did a great job of telling this story. I like all the details you put in like it was hot water and the towels were mostly dry. I can imagine in my mind exactly what was happening.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of telling this story. I like all the details you put in like it was hot water and the towels were mostly dry. I can imagine in my mind exactly what was happening.
ReplyDeleteWilliam, that was an exciting description of the flood! Your details made it so that I could see in my mind what was happening. I can see everyone running up and down the stairs to catch the water! Good job!
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Wow! It must have been crazy with all that going on! Wonderful details, I love the story! That was a very exciting thing to write about. Keep writing awesome stories!
ReplyDelete~Rachel