Great end to your story. I like the dominoes at the end. Does the bad guy win in all your stories?
Not really.
What was making the "crank crank" sound? (that's a really good word choice by the way)
He had a crowbar. He used it to take the bars off the food thing so he could get out.
Lucas, the end of your story was very exciting! I especially like how someone brought the prisoner a crowbar hidden in some food. Did I understand that correctly? Do you think you will use this same character in another story?
Yes. Yes.
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I love the ending of the story! It made me hungry. Thanks for sharing!
Wonderful story, Lucas! I look forward to your funny stories!~Rachel P. Age 9
Great end to your story. I like the dominoes at the end. Does the bad guy win in all your stories?
ReplyDeleteNot really.
DeleteWhat was making the "crank crank" sound? (that's a really good word choice by the way)
ReplyDeleteHe had a crowbar. He used it to take the bars off the food thing so he could get out.
DeleteLucas, the end of your story was very exciting! I especially like how someone brought the prisoner a crowbar hidden in some food. Did I understand that correctly? Do you think you will use this same character in another story?
ReplyDeleteYes. Yes.
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ReplyDeleteI love the ending of the story! It made me hungry. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWonderful story, Lucas! I look forward to your funny stories!
ReplyDelete~Rachel P.
Age 9