Good work Blaine! I like all the different shapes of the people in the town. It seems like they are all friends, even though they are different from each other.
Blaine- this story was really well done. I liked how you had several different parts to the plot. It made it very interesting to read because it took you through the process of decorating the hats for the award and then building houses and making a mine and eventually a whole city! I thought it was neat that you took those same characters through so many different stages of the story. And the dialogue was nice too. Well done.
I just read your story again, Blaine. I like reading about the weird people helping each other and building a city together. It makes me feel happy. I think that's interesting that a story can make me feel something.
I just read your story again, Blaine. I like reading about the weird people helping each other and building a city together. It makes me feel happy. I think that's interesting that a story can make me feel something.
I loved the truck with the drill bit on the front!
ReplyDeleteGood work Blaine! I like all the different shapes of the people in the town. It seems like they are all friends, even though they are different from each other.
ReplyDeleteBlaine- this story was really well done. I liked how you had several different parts to the plot. It made it very interesting to read because it took you through the process of decorating the hats for the award and then building houses and making a mine and eventually a whole city! I thought it was neat that you took those same characters through so many different stages of the story. And the dialogue was nice too. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI loved this story! I wish I could win 10 billion dollars! I also love the houses they built!
ReplyDeleteI just read your story again, Blaine. I like reading about the weird people helping each other and building a city together. It makes me feel happy. I think that's interesting that a story can make me feel something.
ReplyDeleteI just read your story again, Blaine. I like reading about the weird people helping each other and building a city together. It makes me feel happy. I think that's interesting that a story can make me feel something.
ReplyDeleteI wish I had a billion dollars! That skyscraper is so tall. I like their hats! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDelete~Rachel P.
Age 9