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Monday, April 20, 2015

"A Criminal's Life, Part 2" by Lucas





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7 comments:

  1. AmyApril 20, 2015 at 1:54 PM

    I can't wait for Part 3! Did the cops find his money?

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  2. UnknownApril 20, 2015 at 1:57 PM

    Woah! It sounds like life as a criminal would be so intense! I can't wait to see what happens! Does he go back to jail?

    Love,
    Aunt Rachel

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  3. AmyApril 20, 2015 at 2:02 PM

    I like how you made the crook the protagonist in your story. I really hope the criminal doesn't go to jail!

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  4. Susan TalbotApril 20, 2015 at 6:35 PM

    I like that he said "Woowoo" when he got out of jail. That word sounds and looks interesting in your story.

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  5. MarkApril 21, 2015 at 3:13 PM

    The suspense is killing me! Don't leave me hangin!

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  6. MarkApril 21, 2015 at 3:13 PM

    The suspense is killing me! Don't leave me hangin!

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  7. SteveApril 27, 2015 at 11:47 AM

    Lucas, I like how you keep us in suspense with each chapter of your story!

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